i am writing this book, that is erotic romance. I already wrote the first 2 chapters, but i feel that grammatically is not right. I am 16 years old and i have being talking for only 6 years. According to wikipedia profile creation services English is not my native language.So i have alot of mistakes. One of the things i have seen, is that i dont write smooth. I feel that i jump from this action, to this other action.